Look

One of my poem. Please comment.
Look inside my heart,
And you will find a secret place
Reserved for you,
And you alone
Look inside my soul,
And you’ll find profundity
My love is washing in waves
Over every moment of our sharing
Look inside my thoughts
And you’ll see silver stars
Dancing upon our names
Written with a golden chain
Look inside my life
And you’ll know
That love has attached with our names
But you don’t know
And I don’t want to show
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