With You ….
When the sun shines over the world
And birds chirps whole new songs
When petals get fresh with drops of dew
I feel I’m blessed, when I’m with you
When grey clouds fills the sky
And its time to love, for gals and guys
I hold your hand and walk next to you
I feel I’m blessed, when I’m with you
When you’re in my arms, feeling my touch
And showing your care, affection too much
My lips over yours, giving love to you
I feel I’m blessed, when I’m with you
When waves touches us at seashore
Our eyes love each other; so deep, so pure
When our footprints on sand has a long queue
I feel I’m blessed, when I’m with you
I’m waiting for you, to come to my life
All things will mend, no setbacks will arise
May all bliss, all delights be part of you
I feel I’m blessed, when I’m with you
sir ji. salam to you,salute to you.
we feel blessed having friend like you …
awesomeeeeeeeeee ….. u r doing grt job in writing such sweet and full of lovable feelings poems … 🙂
Lovely Poem…MashaAllah…
Nice poem, thanks for share.
nice, aala…. etc poem, MashahAllah 🙂
Nice one Aasim. I would advice you to use complete words to make it look more sophisticated like ‘girls’ instead of ‘gals’ etc.
Thank you Ma’arab bhai for reading and for your advice… from the next time, i will take care of them inshaAllah
xclnt asim mynblwn poem……gud job…. 🙂
its really nice ………Gomd bless you more and i wish u b having it on bcoz sometimes we really loose n i have lost once…. i wish u dont ….God bless you having those moments again and this time 4ever with …. ……
its really nice ………God bless you more and i wish u b having it on bcoz sometimes we really loose n i have lost once…. i wish u dont ….God bless you having those moments again and this time 4ever with …. ……
hmmmmmmmm …… good one ……. and nice to see/read Word “God” repeatedly…
God may Bless you with every Nice thing. 🙂 …… “Thing” 😉
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cool hai………
really nice and full of love, deep emotions, truly depicting pure love for your partner. Aasim its really good. Keep it up you are doing good in poetry.