With You …. Aasim Naseem, April 22, 2010March 12, 2024 When the sun shines over the world And birds chirp whole new songs When petals get fresh with drops of dew I feel I’m blessed when I’m with youWhen grey clouds fill the sky And it is time to love, for gals and guys I hold your hand and walk next to you I feel I’m blessed when I’m with youWhen you’re in my arms, feeling my touch And showing your care, and affection too much My lips over yours, giving love to you I feel I’m blessed when I’m with youWhen waves touch us at the seashore Our eyes love each other; so deep, so pure When our footprints on sand have a long queue I feel I’m blessed when I’m with youI’m waiting for you, to come into my life All things will mend, and no setbacks will arise May all bliss, all delights be part of you I feel I’m blessed when I’m with youAasim NaseemI’m an engineer by profession, a blogger and a photojournalist by hobby. Seasonal writer at LAFZ Media UK. I write on different topics and things around us. Contact me at +971.56.126.8842 or Aasim.Naseem@outlook.com Pen's Whispers I feel I’m blessedmy new poemmy poemswhen I’m with youWith You
awesomeeeeeeeeee ….. u r doing grt job in writing such sweet and full of lovable feelings poems … 🙂Reply
Nice one Aasim. I would advice you to use complete words to make it look more sophisticated like ‘girls’ instead of ‘gals’ etc.Reply
Thank you Ma’arab bhai for reading and for your advice… from the next time, i will take care of them inshaAllahReply
its really nice ………Gomd bless you more and i wish u b having it on bcoz sometimes we really loose n i have lost once…. i wish u dont ….God bless you having those moments again and this time 4ever with …. ……Reply
its really nice ………God bless you more and i wish u b having it on bcoz sometimes we really loose n i have lost once…. i wish u dont ….God bless you having those moments again and this time 4ever with …. ……Reply
hmmmmmmmm …… good one ……. and nice to see/read Word “God” repeatedly… God may Bless you with every Nice thing. 🙂 …… “Thing” 😉Reply
really nice and full of love, deep emotions, truly depicting pure love for your partner. Aasim its really good. Keep it up you are doing good in poetry.Reply